Scientists and other researchers should focus their research on areas that are likely to benefit the greatest number of people.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
'The needs of the many trumps the needs of the few'- this has been universally regarded as a contentious matter. There have been countless arguments made both in favor and against this statement. The majority are biased towards the 'many' for a plethora of reasons. Arguably the greatest cause for the opinion is that the suffering of the 'masses' are received with more sympathy than the distressing condition of a paltry few in the plebian. This is an traversty of the right of every man, woman and child. The fact the they suffer in silence or in anonymity does not excuse the failure and neglect on the part of those responsible of providing aid.
The study undertaken by Scientists and researchers are chosen after a lot of scrutiny on the part of the professional. There are many factors which have to be taken into account(the scope, the time , the need etc). As of this moment ,a cure for Covid19 or the Corona Virus
is the need of the hour. This pandemic has destroyed nations and wreaked havoc across the globe. All the medical professionals and researchers are fixated on fighting this and developing a cure for it. Nevertheless the research on other specialised diseases must also continue during this period as there are many people depending on cures for such diseases. There are over two million people affected by the corona virus worldwide but that should not overshadow the fact there are many individuals who have been living with other illness who deserve a reprieve from for it as well.
A very small percentage of people suffer from autism or are handicapped in the world. However this does not devalue their needs or requirements. Many of these individuals have thriving and successful careers and have a great impact on those around them. Do they not deserve a chance at living a exuberant life. There are various breakthroughstaking place in technologies every day and all these people are roseate that , some day an invention(a miracle to them) will help them lead a more oppurtunistic life.
In conclusion I would like to state the our decisions shiould not dependent on quantity. Yes certain situations are more crucial than others and require immediate action as the case of the corona outbreak however we must not side track all the other issues that are being faced by the people. Our objective must be to alleviate the distress and serve the need of all. This is the milestonewhich we must completed on order to take a step towards a better world.
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- Critical judgment of work in any given field has little value unless it comes from someone who is an expert in that field Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the 70
- Scientists and other researchers should focus their research on areas that are likely to benefit the greatest number of people Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoni 13
- Scientists and other researchers should focus their research on areas that are likely to benefit the greatest number of people Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoni 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2051.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 426.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81455399061 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71426049198 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528169014085 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 657.0 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.4435430115 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2272727273 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77272727273 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0998419646191 0.243740707755 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0260171205331 0.0831039109588 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0293980344886 0.0758088955206 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0566115717295 0.150359130593 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319132875668 0.0667264976115 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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