Society should identify those children who have special talents and provide training for them at an early age to develop their talents.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The main purpose of education is to develop the personality of a student from a very young age. Different students may be talented in different domains like dancing or singing. I suggest society recognize the kids with special talents and provide training from an early age before it is too late.
Children develop interest towards an activity from a very young age. Developing this interest in early stages will help the child in other areas of learning. For example, a child who is good at singing can use his singing ability to calm himself down during a stressful situation. Furthermore, training towards developing his singing talent can give him a sense of achievement. However, if this talent is ignored the child will not stand out of the crowd.
In contrary, some children may not show their talents at an early age. Parents may push their children into learning something against their will. This will ultimately lead to the child being sad and uninterested. Parents should patiently wait and notice any signs of talent their child is showing and help their child develop that talent and not push their child to learn something against their will.
In conclusion, society plays an important role in developing the talent of a child. I suggest the government should be generous enough to sponsor training for a child who is underprivileged. Society should find children with special talents and provide training for them to develop their talents at an early age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 2235.4752809 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 246.0 442.535393258 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02032520325 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61701811089 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 215.323595506 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 704.065955056 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5864167383 60.3974514979 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.3333333333 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.06666666667 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295217747106 0.243740707755 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118399650611 0.0831039109588 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115823531159 0.0758088955206 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207939482673 0.150359130593 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0997457903744 0.0667264976115 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 100.480337079 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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