Society should identify those children who have special talents and provide training for them at an early age to develop their talents.
children are the future of society. so yes for better sociecty, society should identify those children who has a special telent and provied tarining for development of their talent.
It will always be a added advantage for any talent which is identify at early phase of life for proper devlpment of talent. Let's take a example that some particular kid is very good in batting of cricket game. If talent of that kid is idnetify at his early age and society help him for development of his talent to full strenght then that kid can become a very good cricketer at small age and will serve a society and so as his country for longer time.
But, there is good chance that any children can find swing in is mood and children will not be that good as compare to his early part of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Children
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
children are the future of society. so yes for better sociecty, society should...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t of their talent. It will always be a added advantage for any talent which is...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'identified'.
Suggestion: identified
...added advantage for any talent which is identify at early phase of life for proper devlp...
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...of life for proper devlpment of talent. Lets take a example that some particular kid...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 58.6224719101 26% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 641.0 2235.4752809 29% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 145.0 442.535393258 33% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42068965517 5.05705443957 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 4.55969084622 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2493333667 2.79657885939 80% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 215.323595506 39% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579310344828 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 704.065955056 29% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.2473099999 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.833333333 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364801549232 0.243740707755 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168879476187 0.0831039109588 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139237104645 0.0758088955206 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246303095331 0.150359130593 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135598763167 0.0667264976115 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 48.8420337079 131% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 12.1639044944 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 100.480337079 22% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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