Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
In the given statement, author states that efforts should only be made to save those endangered species which may go extinct in future due to the result of human activities. The statement is not valid as efforts should be made to save all endangered species rather than just some species which are going to extinct in near future that too due to the result of human activities. One should completely disagree with the author as this is a biased view towards the natural resources.
First of all, the main reason of going against the statement is that all the species are useful and helpful in some or the other way than why efforts should be made just to save some endangered species whose potential extinction may happen due to human activities. It should be the responsibility to save every species that are endangered and going to extinct in near future. The benefits that we get from the species are enjoyed without discrimination than why should efforts to save them should be divided.
Secondly, every species is of use to society in some or other way. These species help in the growth of the society and its prosperity. And there extinction may be due to different reasons like human activities, natural calamities, environmental change etc. The endangered species like some flora and fauna may go extinct due to the forest fire or flood or cyclone like calamities that are not caused by society but that does not mean that society should not do any thing to save them if they are not under the list of species that have the danger of potential extinction.
Moreover, if the species that are endangered but not under potential extinction are not saved than they may lead these species to potential extinction not by the result of human activities but the efforts are needed to save them. As these species will be helpful to us in near future. So, despite of potential extinction not due to human activities they should be saved by the society.
However, most of the endangered species goes to extinction are due to human activities only. be it mangrooves on the coastal region that is endangered due to the rapid industrial activities or be it some animals that are going to extinct due to the human activities in the jungle. The main reason of any species to go endangered and then extinct will always be human and their greed.
In conclusion, it should be added that mainly the reason of the potential extinction of species are human activities but there are also other reason which leads them to extinction and efforts should be made by society to save them at any cost.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2147.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 451.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76053215078 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56469623474 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.343680709534 0.4932671777 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 684.0 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.1008088365 60.3974514979 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.294117647 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5294117647 23.4991977007 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 5.21951772744 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354977261642 0.243740707755 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163189092621 0.0831039109588 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788342427084 0.0758088955206 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24215217759 0.150359130593 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048103951584 0.0667264976115 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.38706741573 82% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 100.480337079 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.