Some people believe that it is helpful to view a challenging situation as an opportunity for
personal growth. Others believe that reimagining challenging situations this way occupies
too much of the focus one needs to face challenges effectively.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own
position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and
supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Surely, whenever one is faced with a challenging situation, he must not slacken or weaken but rather handle the situation effectively, without losing courage. Viewing a difficult and adverse situation as an opportunity gives the individual strength and purpose to face that situation effectively. Hence, I fundamentally agree with the author's claim is helpful to view a challenging situation as an opportunity for personal growth. My viewpoints are aptly illustrated through the below-mentioned examples.
Firstly, to face any challenging situation, one must make relentless efforts to put up a strong fight against any difficult situation and never lose courage or determination. It would be prudent to assume that such an unpleasant situation can be considered as an opportunity for personal growth. For instance, in the year 1945, the Hiroshima and Nagasaki bombings led to several catastrophic results in Japan. Many people had lost their lives and as well as possessions due to these attacks. In addition to this, these bombs released poisonous gasses which led to the spread of several diseases in the two cities. Further, people were devoid of basic amenities such as hospitals or places to eat or sleep. But, even in this unfortunate situation, people did not slacken and saw this challenging situation as an opportunity for personal growth and development. They were determined to rebuild everything that was lost in these attacks. Further, the government had the resolution to make Japan a more powerful nation than it was prior to the attacks. Therefore, as the people saw this catastrophic event as an opportunity for personal growth, they were successful in achieving their goals and facing the situation effectively. It is also quite evident today, that Japan is one of the most powerful and peaceful nations in the world.
However, in contrast to the above statement, some people argue that one cannot always view these situations as an opportunity for personal growth. According to them, we need to focus more on finding solutions and strategies to solve these adverse situations. But, according to me, when we view a particular situation as an opportunity, our mind is automatically inclined towards finding productive solutions for that problem, and thus, we are able to face the situations effectively. Further, assuming the challenge as an opportunity could help the individual to obtain a sanguine and optimistic attitude while dealing with that situation.
To sum up, to face any challenging situation one must not give up on efforts and determination but rather should view this situation as an opportunity for personal growth. Assuming the situation in this manner is effective as the mind immediately starts to find ways and strategies that could help in effectively facing the challenge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, in contrast, such as, as well as, in contrast to, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2377.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 446.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32959641256 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05925661832 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488789237668 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 750.6 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5655436275 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.19047619 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2380952381 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.95238095238 5.21951772744 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.439061089712 0.243740707755 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132118498537 0.0831039109588 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114828725244 0.0758088955206 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.313031962377 0.150359130593 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464586783546 0.0667264976115 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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