Some people believe it is imperative for individuals living in developed nations to reduce their energy consumption and lead a more sustainable lifestyle, given the evidence for global climate change. Others believe that such drastic lifestyle changes are unwarranted, based on the existing evidence for global climate change
In the above issue the writer says that it is very difficult to decrease the energy consumption in the developed nation.I am in total agreement with that of the author.There seems no loop for diagreement with author's view.There are mutliple reason for my approval with the author view.I will try to ellaborate in above paragraph.
First of all, the writer says that in the developed nation it is very difficult to reduce energy consumption as many day to day needs has become dependent on the energy.Thus it seems very difficult to reduce the energy consumption.Moreover, there many other reason which will prompt my approval.
Secondly, the writer say that such drastic change are unwraranted. Thus , i am completely in acceptances with it.As the change in the atmosphere may bring many enivornmrnt changes also and it may turn to difficulty.For example, todays generation is directly or indirectly dependent upon the enery for the welfare of it.From small pin to that of the ginatic,everything is dependent on the energy. However, reducement of the energy may reduce the invention of the new machine.The reduction in the energy may thus reduce the progress of the nation.Thus many new problem maybe faced due to this.Thus enery consumption is one of the basic necessities for carrying out daily needs and to stop it is unjustified.
Thirdly, the writer further says that such changes can unwarranted as it may effect the global climate.Thus the change maybe harmful. In the developed nation, it very difficult to reduce the energy consumption.Similary, many household activites are dependent on the energy and to reduce them will may result into many problems.As in the developed nation, invention and reasearch are ver important.Thus with invention and research,the energy consumption plays a major role.
On conclusion, I would like to say that there seems no disagreement for the acceptance with the author.To bulk evidence as whole, I would like to say that the reducation in the energy consumption may reduce the progress of the nation. After all life has many option,we take some and abandon some.Thus to take risk is just imperative.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'thus', 'after all', 'for example', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.234666666667 0.240241500013 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.136 0.157235817809 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.122666666667 0.0880659088768 139% => OK
Adverbs: 0.056 0.0497285424764 113% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0346666666667 0.0444667217837 78% => OK
Prepositions: 0.125333333333 0.12292977631 102% => OK
Participles: 0.00533333333333 0.0406280797675 13% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.19885263624 2.79330140395 115% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0373333333333 0.030933414821 121% => OK
Particles: 0.00266666666667 0.0016655270985 160% => OK
Determiners: 0.122666666667 0.0997080785238 123% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0346666666667 0.0249443105267 139% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00266666666667 0.0148568991511 18% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2144.0 2732.02544248 78% => OK
No of words: 349.0 452.878318584 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.14326647564 6.0361032391 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.58838876751 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.355300859599 0.366273622748 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.255014326648 0.280924506359 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.21776504298 0.200843997647 108% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.180515759312 0.132149295362 137% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19885263624 2.79330140395 115% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 219.290929204 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464183381089 0.48968727796 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.5358016222 55.4138127331 86% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6194690265 44% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 38.7777777778 23.380412469 166% => OK
Sentence length SD: 102.785405122 59.4972553346 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 238.222222222 141.124799967 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.7777777778 23.380412469 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 0.674092028746 247% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 5.21349557522 652% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 64.2792104425 51.4728631049 125% => OK
Elegance: 1.61176470588 1.64882698954 98% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325521498911 0.391690518653 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.219330371586 0.123202303941 178% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.1378912327 0.077325440228 178% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.748011531517 0.547984918172 137% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.240093233167 0.149214159877 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.194628471972 0.161403998019 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364739445694 0.0892212321368 41% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.499799041956 0.385218514788 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0648503749406 0.0692045440612 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238821032136 0.275328986314 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264522101701 0.0653680567796 40% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.4325221239 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 13.5995575221 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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