Some people believe that scientific discoveries have given us a much better understanding of the world around us. Others believe that science has revealed to us that the world is infinitely more complex than we ever realized.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Science has led to the advancement of humankind. It is a gift which helps us understand things which disguised under magic. Science is the reason we now have aeroplanes and submarines. It is the constant which is always changing and developing. Scientific discoveries have led to industrial revolutions. For example, when fire was merely a means to cook food, it later was used to burn coal which soon enough was the driving force of the Steam Engine Trains. The elements of nature which were once forces to be reckoned with, are now being used to our benefits and further our growth.
In the early ages, the earth was believed to be square, of whose edge we would fall off, and the stars were believed to be shining objects in the sky. But scientific discoveries have revealed to us just how infinitely complex the universe is. The earth is not square and the stars are, in fact, the astronomical objects consisting of plasma. it just makes us realise how much there is yet to discover and explore. A quick reflection on a typical day reveals just how scientific discoveries have revolutionized the world. There are satellites in the orbit which helps us communicate with people on earth. Mars rovers are in production and Nuclear weapons are being developed. All of these would have been inconceivable a couple of centuries back.
Looking back at the first paragraph, one could argue that the scientific discoveries also lead to destruction. however, the pros outweigh the cons. The earlier examples allow the point to be justified within itself. scientific discoveries have led to understanding of gravity and electricity. Innovation and technology provide hope for the future of humanity.
Given the history of human race, yes, there will always be negatives and no limits to the number of unimaginable misuses of technology, however, there will also be the ability to help defeat it. it is time we embrace the hopeful posture to the possibilities laid out by scientific discoveries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, for example, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 333.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97897897898 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85825945719 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573573573574 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4504907337 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3636363636 118.986275619 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1363636364 23.4991977007 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77272727273 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26965825872 0.243740707755 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724900507253 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074195485616 0.0758088955206 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132993316401 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086508235317 0.0667264976115 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 14.1392134831 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.