Some people claim that the goal of politics should be the pursuit of an ideal.Others argue that the goal should be finding common ground and reaching reasonable consensus.
one cannot argue that a political leader is nothing without support from the society, but I believe adhering to ideals is what makes a politician. In the following paragraphs I will bring several reasons to support my point of view.
first, assume the extreme case when political leaders constantly adhere to public opinion. In order to achieve such society, it is necessary to measure the public opinion on every matter once in a while. since ruining elections comes at a great cost, doing so seems impossible from a financial point of view. Furthermore, people are not usually knowledgeable about politics and that is why people choose experts among themselves to represent them on such matters. In order to show the importance of experts vs public opinion, consider the recent example of "brexit"; even though most of the british politicians and economists have advised that leaving European Union will be greatly detrimental to Britain's economy, public vote has agreed with brexit.
Secondly, if one believes in some ideals, in order to gain popularity, it is crucial that they stick to their beliefs. To illustrate, consider Mohandas Gandhi; at his time he was both opposed by Indians and british because of his views regarding fighting without violence. if he, even for once, did not follow his principles, no one would have followed him because it would display him as someone without consistency between his actions and beliefs. Instead, what Gandhi did was adhering to his principles and finally succeeding in acquiring independence from the british.
In strike contrast with the first two reasons, sometimes it is not as easy to decide compromising is the logical option or not. To explain why, consider the case of Syria or Cashmere, what is happening there is that innocent people are dying because neither sides of the clash are not willing to compromise with the other. since in such cases human lives is at stake, I believe that in such cases common ground is more important than following personal goals. On the other hand, sometimes it is reasonable to continue and fight for the cause regardless of oppositions. Abraham Lincoln's fight against slavery exemplifies this case of argument.
For the aforementioned reasons above, one can conclude that politics is about following a goal, but in some cases finding common ground is also crucial.
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- TPO-30 - Integrated Writing Task 70
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2004.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 387.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17829457364 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77746648096 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586563307494 0.4932671777 119% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.38483146067 251% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5555982272 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.882352941 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7647058824 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 5.21951772744 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116941819124 0.243740707755 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0353202395134 0.0831039109588 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536773689422 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0827833451046 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751927606631 0.0667264976115 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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