Students are more responsible for their education than their teachers
When we are born into this world as a mere infant, it takes us time to reach the stage know as 'Adulthood'. This stage, in general, can be considered as the phase of our lives when we are fully capable of making the right decisions for ourselves. However, before reaching this stage we need the help and guidance of people who are already adults such as our parents and teachers and who can help us in making the right decisions for ourselves. Therefore, I disagree with the opinion that 'Students are more responsible for their education than their teachers'.
When we had not even taken our first step as a kid, our parents already dreamed something about our future. For me, it was a really bright one. However, even before that, the first thing they wanted me to do when I came of age was to attend a really good school. When the time had come, they went as far as they could, considering the financial constraints, to send me to a really good school. The only reason my parents would do so was that they believed that a good school provides not just a good environment but also good teachers. They did that for me so that I could reach that adulthood in a good position while simultaneously realizing my dream for the future.
As a kid, I lacked enough motivation to do something as simple as my homework if the teacher was boring. I still believe that its the teacher's duty to make the course being taught as interactive and interesting as possible. This is something a child cannot do. Also its the teacher's duty to point out the negligence if any by the parents.
I do, however, agree that it is very tough to give one on one personal care by the teachers to each student and very often a lot of students are left. Moreover, find good teachers is a relatively tough task. All the above opinion applies especially to school students.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 127, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...eacher was boring. I still believe that its the teachers duty to make the course be...
^^^
Line 5, column 262, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...e. This is something a child cannot do. Also its the teachers duty to point out the ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 267, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...is is something a child cannot do. Also its the teachers duty to point out the negl...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, really, so, still, therefore, while, as to, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 336.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49404761905 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49965275366 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511904761905 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5010734843 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8235294118 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7647058824 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 5.21951772744 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20962096034 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704392536328 0.0831039109588 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148007751846 0.0758088955206 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117344092046 0.150359130593 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889807136972 0.0667264976115 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 14.1392134831 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 48.8420337079 141% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 12.1743820225 68% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 12.1639044944 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 100.480337079 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.