Students are more responsible for their education than their teachers.
Education is one of the most fundamental needs of modern day society, education is not only empowering but provides students with a purpose to contribute to the society and help solve the quintessential questions that need to be answered for the overall growth and development of the society. Modern education in most scenarios involves a group of students (can be from 10-15 to even 45-50) being taught by a teacher. The teacher is a qualified person who is chosen to propagate some information to the students. As easy as it sounds, this job is more than meets the eye. Although education has many motives which inevitably work towards making the world a better place for the future generations, the means are not as clear as the end goal.
Right from when a child is born, the reserves of curiosity in them is nearly endless. This innate curiosity is very powerful and must never be drowsed. As the child ages and gets into school and is made to sit for classes with many other students, it becomes difficult for them to be fully expressive and get their curiosity satisfied. A good teacher, therefore must always be on hand to make sure that his students never ignore their curiosity and just accept whatever is being taught to them. It becomes crucial that in the early stages (till age 12-13) that the teacher is more responsible for a student’s education than the student because the student just does not know enough to take responsibility for their education.
However, once students get to form a basic understanding of how things work, what works for them, what does not work for them, they try to discover more about themselves, they have to take responsibility for their own education more than the teachers. The ramifications can include frequent failures but that is just making them better. A teacher can only offer guidance and his opinions on what makes sense. A teacher can never fully know your inner workings, they can only estimate it. So, it becomes critical that you realize what works best for you, and there will be many roadblocks but the more you own up to the problems, the more you develop.
It can be argued that without the teacher the students can’t educate themselves, thus making the teachers responsible for their education, in the modern world, there is an abundance of information that can be easily obtained from the internet and can help the student. So, the student doesn’t have to completely depend upon the teacher also. So, there is no way that everything can be put on the teacher. There are a multitude of factors that can hinder the teacher’s ability to make sure that each individual gets the education at the level that they deserve, some teachers are not even seriously trying to do that. So, it becomes paramount that a student takes the rein in their own hands.
So, in my opinion a student has to be responsible for not only education, but learning as that is something which can never stop in their life. Although, a teacher is obligated to help the student at every turn, after a point, it becomes difficult for them to cater to each student, thus making it impractical to take responsibility for each student. As Albert Einstein quotes ,”I was born intelligent, but education ruined me”, the dependence of students on teacher needs to decrease and the sooner they realize that they have the responsibility and the power to learn by themselves, external requirements decrease and the result is self-dependency which lasts way longer than what anything external can provide.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 347, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
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Line 9, column 377, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... each student. As Albert Einstein quotes ,'I was born intelligent, but educat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, as to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 33.0505617978 182% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2960.0 2235.4752809 132% => OK
No of words: 606.0 442.535393258 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88448844884 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.96155895361 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74705890063 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 215.323595506 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450495049505 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 920.7 704.065955056 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.7360657359 60.3974514979 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.695652174 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.347826087 23.4991977007 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.82608695652 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378164060136 0.243740707755 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11073084773 0.0831039109588 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120625631935 0.0758088955206 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240843613481 0.150359130593 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585615624314 0.0667264976115 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 100.480337079 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.