Students are more responsible for their studies that are their teachers.
A Teacher can teach a student how to study effectively but that does not lead to success unless a student plays his part.The prompt recommends that students should be held more responsible for studies as one can let you how to walk but you have to walk yourself.I strongly agree with the point made above and will provide two reasons for support.
A teacher can be a guide who tells the way that leads to the solution of a problem but to explore that path one must give one's strong input. Thus, a teacher plays a torch in students life. Torch will lead to nowhere unless one move. For instance, IIT Mumbai is one of the prestigious college for engineering in India. Every year lots of students join in order for the love of technology or to get a good job. Same Student to Teacher ratio, Same faculties, same courses, same libraries, same labs, same timing, Still some students outperform others. Some students get a high paying job, same not. This point illustrates that a teacher can be held responsible for education of students but that does not equals the contribution of one's own self in one's choices.
Further, even if one suggests that Teacher should fulfill his duties of making an student learn by any means. He or she must not forget that you can not make anyone improve oneself if you try to make them do something by pressuring. For Example, if a soccer player is reluctant to practice and his coach tries to make him practice somehow.Player might practice for the sake of his position but he will play less heed to the suggestions given by coach in comparison to the one who is willing to practice by his own. The result will be equally likely to be seen in an actual match.A person will be more efficient if he is willing to do something himself.
Of course, Some Might argue that some teacher are not following their roles but that nowhere indicates that teacher is more responsible because we have seen a pleathora of examples where a person reaches the maximum height of his success on his own will. Also, Today technology plays an important part if one want to study. So , one should be held responsible for one's own decisions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ll some students outperform others. Some students get a high paying job, same not...
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Line 5, column 704, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'equal'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: equal
...education of students but that does not equals the contribution of ones own self in on...
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Suggestion: one's
...ls the contribution of ones own self in ones choices. Further, even if one sugg...
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Line 9, column 80, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...her should fulfill his duties of making an student learn by any means. He or she m...
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Line 9, column 166, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'improves'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, thus, for example, for instance, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1776.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 385.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61298701299 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4983712378 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496103896104 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.7665465128 60.3974514979 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0625 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213372474397 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667018453954 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058572556629 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138616096964 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597298897811 0.0667264976115 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 48.8420337079 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.8971910112 147% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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