Teachers' salaries should be based on students' academic performance.

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Teachers' salaries should be based on students' academic performance.

Teachers are the most important people in one's life after parents. They contribute significantly in molding a child's future. Hence teachers carry a huge responsibility of educating students. This makes teaching a very noble profession indeed.

It will be unfair to teachers if their salary is based on students academic performance. A teacher can only do so much in the process of education. In process of learning, a students' participation is equally required as that of teachers'. If student itself is disinterested in learning, the teacher then has to suffer it's consequences even if he/she has devoted all the time and energy in helping them understand. This is unfair on so many levels.

Not everybody has same mental acuity. Some may be very good in academics, some good in sports. Hence only judging a students' academic performance becomes moot. The teachers get an additional problem to worry about in their already complex job.

The pressure of maintaining optimal academic grades among students, compels a teacher to teach students only whats' required to score well in tests. This defeats the purpose of learning, as students do not learn the concepts thoroughly. This may prove detrimental to their careers in future, as half knowledge is more dangerous than no knowledge at all.

Hence it is preposterous to leave the fate of teachers' salaries in hands of students.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a student' or simply 'students'?
Suggestion: a student; students
...s of education. In process of learning, a students apos; participation is equally required...
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...rybody has same mental acuity. Some may be very good in academics, some good in sp...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a student' or simply 'students'?
Suggestion: a student; students
...some good in sports. Hence only judging a students apos; academic performance becomes moot...
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...ompels a teacher to teach students only whats apos; required to score well in tests. ...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
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... may prove detrimental to their careers in future, as half knowledge is more dangerous th...
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Suggestion: Hence,
... dangerous than no knowledge at all. Hence it is preposterous to leave the fate of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, then, well, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 14.8657303371 7% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 2235.4752809 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 234.0 442.535393258 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15384615385 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88361489456 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598290598291 0.4932671777 121% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 704.065955056 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => Sentence length is too short
Sentence length SD: 37.4418118332 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.9411764706 118.986275619 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.7647058824 23.4991977007 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.47058823529 5.21951772744 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.453712912666 0.243740707755 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132379656963 0.0831039109588 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134150406767 0.0758088955206 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241324695812 0.150359130593 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106381503945 0.0667264976115 159% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 48.8420337079 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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