Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Life was meant to become simpler with the advent of modern day technology. But not all things go as planned. Often times, due to irresponsible use, the same technology complicates our lives in more ways than it was intended to simplify.
People who are used to technology on a daily basis, as it is quite evident around us, refrain from socializing in general. They in themselves feel satisfied and independent as if all their needs are being fulfilled solely by technology. This leads to social isolation as a consequence, a problem quite common among the modern households where children and parents no longer spend time together in doing chores, instead spend more individualistic lives. Take for example the life a mid aged working woman, she unlike her mother or the previous generations will prefer ordering groceries online instead of actually visiting a store or go out and meet some neighbors. She will have less time for her own children, who are left to be raised by housemaids and nannies.
Technology was meant to help us in solving complex things but with the passage of time we started using technology for even the simplest of things. For instance the mathematical as well as analytical abilities in general have declined since the invention of modern calculators and computers. People became overly dependent on technological advances, and did not want to put efforts or use their own brains. As a consequence, human brain is becoming weaker. We do not have the same mental skills needed for survival in case of an adversity as our ancestors, simply because we do not engage our brain to such extremities.
However, on the brighter side, we do observe some uses of technology that have helped mankind in general. Take, for example, the case of a physically impaired person who cannot move around on its own, in his case using electric wheel chair or even prosthetic limbs everyday helps him. Technology made his life a little simpler if not great. Similarly, climatic predictions can be made more accurately, hence preventing damage from a cyclone or a tsunami in time.
Conclusively it can be stated that though technological advances have helped humans in different aspects of life, however over dependence on technology on individual levels has complicated the things for us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, hence, however, if, similarly, so, well, for example, for instance, in general, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1926.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 382.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04188481675 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84411765502 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604712041885 0.4932671777 123% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8824692649 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.21951772744 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0805894812946 0.243740707755 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0244081029339 0.0831039109588 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0247294039241 0.0758088955206 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0485950569803 0.150359130593 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263402266825 0.0667264976115 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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