A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Under the national educational boards, schools are coerced to follow certain minimal guidlines but usually they have an inbuilt tendency to alter the curriculum just to get better results. In order to conquer such a goal they often make radical changes to the educational programs thus greately impacting the learning curve of the students. however, the question of whether a national curriculum is required, prevails.
Let us try to analyze the facts involved with the current system of education. For now, national standards are set only for the high school classes and that too because there are national enterance tests that need to be standardized. this is a setback as most of the brain development for a student occurs at early stages of the school when his or her brain is most receptive. it is at that point of time when caution must be taken as to what is to be fed to the students in the name of good education. schools relax their testing standards and use abridged books to maintain a sense of low burden. On the contrary, their purpose to so is to produce better annual results. such practices leave a young mind crippled and unprepared for the cut throat competition in the form of enterance exams.
standardizing a nationwide curriculum will be a humonguous task. however, once a set up like this is deployed it will directly benefit many more generations to come. The primary focus should setting up of rules for the syllabus. it should be at par with a gradual learning curve that eventually merges upto the level of the enterance exams. Besides, such a move will ensure that the students are getting a concise and meaningful lesson. Also, it would mean that those who cannot afford to take up admission in the top notch expensive schools can still get to study and read the same syllabus irrespective of their background.
Though, there are affirmative benefits of implementing the national standards, still some extenuating circumstances produce unwanted ramifications. there will be no more need for more or greate rqualified teachers, or they might remain underpaid as such. If so is the case, many people will loose their jobs very soon. so care must be taken as to what to include and what to not. Atleast some additional topics like Algebra, Trignometery and Probability should be added to the syllabus of earlier classes.
The need of the hour is concrete measure and standards to produce scholars of tomorrow.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, still, thus, as to, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2038.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 413.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93462469734 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74946477393 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55205811138 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3909855122 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6363636364 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7727272727 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176501964605 0.243740707755 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446767936093 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480391532871 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847482534058 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527694648409 0.0667264976115 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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