Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
With the development of technology, our lives have changed a lot. Some believe that with the high-tech, we are enjoying more convenience than before, while others argue that the advancement of technology also makes our lives become more complicated. I believe these two viewpoints are not mutually exclusive, and our lives nowadays can be both simplified and complicated.
It is easy to find that lifestyles in modern society are quite different from previous eras, and most of the changes should be attributed to the development of technology. Due to the internet communication, we can not enjoy online shopping and social networks. Besides, our living conditions are more convenient because of contribution from endless engineers. It is the technology that make us do not bother to think about some trivial stuff such as how to get to a destination or how do we cook a delicious meal, so we can spare more time on more valuable things such as study and work.
However, the development of technology sometimes makes us harder to choose among different options. Since we are not know more thoroughly about the world than our predecessors, thanks to the rapid development of science and technology, we are offered different choices when tackling problems. For example, if the restaurants around us are limited, we have no choice but to eat there, so we do not need to make choices on which one should be pick up as the place for a lunch. The development of technology not only make our lives more convenient, it also brings more possibilities to our lives. As a consequence, it really makes the decision making become more difficult.
Just realizing these two changes is kind of superficial, while actually being simplified and being complicated are not necessarily two contradicted ideas. What do we think when Albert Einstein discovered that the speed of light keeps a constant no matter what in which coordinates? Is it make our world more complicated to be understand? Probably not, because world is actually very difficult to understand, and if not him, we are just too stupid to realize how little do we know about the world. Then is he making the world more simple? I do not think so, since his theory is really hard for a common person to understand, even for a educated people who has acquired elementary knowledge about physics. In this sense, our lives have become both simplified and complicated.
In conclusion, I believe the impact of development of technology on our lives are not easy to be generalized by simplicity or complicity, rather, it could be both simple and complex.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...ong different options. Since we are not know more thoroughly about the world than ou...
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Line 5, column 310, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding restaurants'?
Suggestion: the surrounding restaurants
...when tackling problems. For example, if the restaurants around us are limited, we have no choice but to e...
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Line 7, column 634, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...a common person to understand, even for a educated people who has acquired elemen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, however, if, really, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2170.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 436.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97706422018 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95152030288 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488532110092 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 697.5 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 6.24550561798 256% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.037870825 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.21951772744 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20714364607 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803386377862 0.0831039109588 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620136873197 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129291726169 0.150359130593 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064854210753 0.0667264976115 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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