Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
Technology is developed from our needs and wants and thus is specifically aimed at making our lives easier. If used in the right manner, technology has wide implications in all aspects of our life, medicine, communication, transport and military to name a few. Therefore, we can say that technology on the whole is more of a boon than a bane as it simplifies our work while increasing efficiency at the same time.
Anything that arises from the need of humans is bound to help make their lives easier and more convenient. For instance, mobile phones were developed so that people could talk to their dear ones on the go, even when hundreds of miles separate them. Similarly, other inventions possible due to advancements in technology, from something as basic as washing machines to as high-tech as artfcial intelligence are all aimed at reducing our efforts to perform a certain task by automating it. What's more is the fact that today, this tchnology is not limited to a select few but ca be easily accessed by anyone and everyone that needs it.
Technology is a progressive field, it helps our growth from primitive beings to an advanced and elite species. All the previous inventions in technology serve as a step and help in boltering further advancements in technology. One such crucial application of technology is in the medical field, where I believe technolgy has evolved and revolutionised procedures that involve high level of human skill. Survival is probably the most primitive instinct of us humans and thus it is only natural that medicine is one field in which there are maximum research opportunities on account of the incurable diseases that exist today. Thus we can conclude that where there is dire need we can observe rapid advancement in technology that helps our growthb as a species.
On the contrary, technology, over the years has made humans indolent if anything. Automation of several daily processes such as washing clothes and dishes or cooking food while helping us do our work has made us overly reliant on technology. Also, the excessive use of mobile phones has seen a decrease in the number of times people actually meet and talk acrros a table, thus decreasing real interaction.
If used in the right manner though, technology is a huge bane to humankind than it is a bane. As stated, it help us grow and makes our lives easier. Thus it can be disinterstedly concluded that technolgy is more beneficial to us than it is harmful
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, similarly, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, such as, on the contrary, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2057.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 420.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89761904762 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85136220777 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538095238095 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 670.5 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2840486455 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.277777778 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 5.21951772744 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255562568188 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817299510326 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810190214127 0.0758088955206 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147235782619 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759640238796 0.0667264976115 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.