There should be a same national curriculum for students until they enter college
The statement suggests that a nation should keep its curriculum same for all the students until they enter college. I agree with this recommendation , of keeping the curriculum same for all students.
Keeping curriculum same for all students until they enter high school will provide all the students with equal opportunities.With the same curriculum, every student will be able to explore different types of subject and they will be able to figure out which one is most suitable to them.
As for instance, many parents don't have a proper education background as compared to aspiration of their childrens. They might not know what is best for their child and with this small circle for information on selection of curriculum, their child will not be able to choose a curriculum which is best for that student's future.
If the curriculum is same for all of them,they will study every type of curriculum. And when they are about to enter college,they will take the stream which they find more suitable for them. This will not only give them a freedom of choices but also a sense of self satisfaction.
Although we should also ensure that scenario for selection of curriculum will be totally different for students who are focused on their specific stream of subjects from early age. Recommendation of same national curriculum might not prove any beneficial to them as they know what they want from very early age.
In sum , keeping same national curriculum can be beneficial for nation as a whole. However, it might also affect the scenario for students who are very focused regarding to their subjects from very early age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, so, as for, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 2235.4752809 61% => OK
No of words: 273.0 442.535393258 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98901098901 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7336555612 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 215.323595506 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465201465201 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 421.2 704.065955056 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9038581581 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 5.21951772744 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.512434802687 0.243740707755 210% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.223998852786 0.0831039109588 270% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144558384874 0.0758088955206 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.31020074329 0.150359130593 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0848705661596 0.0667264976115 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 100.480337079 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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