Those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others may express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy.
Persistence and perseverance are the two hallmarks of the human race. Throughout history leaders who have seen their ideas through despite setbacks, criticism, and doubts have often been the ones who have achieved great success. Since legacy is often intertwined with success, great success means an even greater legacy.
Human beings are blessed with the ability to not only break down a complex problem into various tiny problems but also to solve each of these tiny problems and devise a solution for the bigger complex problem. This methodology of solving problems is one that led this world to countless innovations and led to massive changes to shape the world as it is today. However to say this was an easy thing would be a serious misconception. Right from Thomas Edison to Nicholas Tesla, each of these scientists had countless failures, and the common public laughed at their out-of-the-world attempts. Yet these failures and mockery didn't deter them. Instead, they became more resilient until they achieved success and earned the respect of people all around the globe.
Taking the example of the great Indian leader Mahatma Gandhi, who decided that he won't retaliate against the British colonizers with violence. Choosing the path of non-violence, he set out to end British rule. Many ridiculed him and rarely did he manage to gain support in his early campaign. Yet in the face of adversity, he stood tall. He believed that his idea of non-violence is what will earn India its independence and stood by it. As he went on his salt march, people realized what a genius idea it was and joined his march. Seeing lakhs of Indians spurned on by this "laughable" idea, the British not only took notice but also ceded to some of his demands. From there on he went on and on, earning not only his country's freedom but leaving a legacy so powerful that it is unmatched even today. Nelson Mandela was inspired by the great man and he fought apartheid using a similar idea thereby leaving his own legacy.
Technology is essentially an applied form of an idea. An idea that has been scaled to serve a larger population. However, innovation is hardly courted without doubts and criticism. Starting from Galileo’s contention with the religious bodies of that time to Darwin’s theory of evolution; these ideas which had created a legacy in itself were punctured with criticism during the time it was proposed. Nevertheless, Galileo and Darwin saw their ideas. Had Galileo given up and Darwin yielded to the dogmatic notion of that time, science and innovation would be greatly impeded, and thus the human race as a whole.
Human beings are a constantly evolving species. In conjunction with our biological evolution, we are undergoing gradual changes in society, family, and the world at large. These changes might not always be positive, which makes criticism, expression of doubt, and scepticism even more necessary. Nevertheless, the ideas that leave a legacy are pursued by people who are intransigent enough to see it through.
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- Understanding the past is of little use to those in current positions of leadership 58
- Does being a man or a woman make you worse at certain tasks due to physical differences 83
- The following is an excerpt from a speech given to the School Board about a change to the curriculum Because the future will be dominated by technology we must make four years of computer programming mandatory for all high school students If our students 38
- Technology while apparently aimed to simplify our lives only makes our lives more complicated 79
- Discussing controversial topics with those with contrasting views is not useful because very few people change their mind when questioned about their core beliefs 83
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 362, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...nges to shape the world as it is today. However to say this was an easy thing would be ...
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Line 3, column 624, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ttempts. Yet these failures and mockery didnt deter them. Instead, they became more r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, nevertheless, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2557.0 2235.4752809 114% => OK
No of words: 505.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06336633663 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74048574033 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73438029622 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 286.0 215.323595506 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566336633663 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 788.4 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.0419671979 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3214285714 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0357142857 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.21951772744 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18143858321 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435266896507 0.0831039109588 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688731193609 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107437895745 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616844795218 0.0667264976115 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 147.0 100.480337079 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.