Those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others may
express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with
the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and
supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might
not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Being better than one’s peers and reaching the heyday of his respective field is the purpose of anyone’s life, but it is not clean easy way clear of hatred and envy, but at the same time it needs help and wisdom from the others. To reach the highest point the person has to ignore whatever reduces his confidence in himself.
The human being nature is that he is joules of what others achieve, so he tends to make criticism to weaken the enthusiasm of the successful people. A man or woman who seeks productive life full with achievements must ignore negative comments that aims to shake his confidence and unnerve him, these comments does not mean that you are less qualified. Sometimes in the contrary it might mean that the person is hardworking that he get this criticism from people who feels powerless to do the same that the all they have left is to make the one successful less success. There is common saying that “there is no successful man without enemies”; anyone can go through the history to find that people with a great touch in our lives faced people tried to denigrate their legacy, being criticized is more than normal in the way of success. These great figures not only ignored the bad voices but teach us not to listen to them , because no matter how hurtful it was for them they moved on and the works stand until our day but who ridiculed them are not remembered in anything but the bad reputations they gained in just making abusive comments.
But the person should not be deaf that ignores positive criticism that aims to guide him to enhance his performance especially from the people around him who love him and happy to give him any support. Many fathers and mothers yell at their sons and daughters for their own sakes, their doubts and the way they express them might be irritating for their own son but the one of us should get the advantage from it. Each one of us need to learn from the others’ experiences and listen to their advises to improve himself.
Based on that I agree that the one who seeks success have to neglect others’ criticism and move on in his path to reach his dream, humans no matter what you do they will have their way to ridicule one’s achievements, so he must do what he wants and nothing else.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 932, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...oices but teach us not to listen to them , because no matter how hurtful it was fo...
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Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
...enhance his performance especially from the people around him who love him and happy to give him any ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to their advises to improve himself. Based on that I agree that the one who s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, as for, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 33.0505617978 188% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1888.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 410.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60487804878 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45118091905 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514634146341 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 23.0359550562 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.963445139 60.3974514979 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.636363636 118.986275619 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.2727272727 23.4991977007 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 5.21951772744 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140118070015 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550053207967 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331345084395 0.0758088955206 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864954347851 0.150359130593 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439333159656 0.0667264976115 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 14.1392134831 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 48.8420337079 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 11.2143820225 150% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.