Those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others may express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy.
There is a saying in my culture, " People will say something, or the other because that is their job." If one has an idea that would possible change, or revolutionize something, should be ready to confront the masses and their criticism. It totally agree that one should see through their own ideas more cognitively rather than thinking about the opposition as no new ideas can exist without people's doubt and criticism.
Human brain is hard-wired to demur changes, and reluctance to accept new ideas could be blamed to our human brain. People are generally reluctant to accept new ideas especially the ones which are groundbreaking or iconoclastic. For instance, All the new ideas including revolutions , including ban on bad social practice like untouchability and child marriages, where initially harshly doubted and criticized by the masses. Slowly people comprehended the changes, and the started taking part in such revolutions to eradicate such social evils. Therefore, one should be more driven for their ideas rather than thinking about what people says or doubts.
No one in this world was ever able to keep everyone happy, and neither will, so there is no point in wasting energy and time in it. If one cede to people's doubts and criticism, they will never able to do what they want because you can't keep everyone happy.
- Undergraduate students majoring in Business or in the Sciences should not be required to take any courses in the Humanities since those courses won’t benefit their future careers. 75
- Those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others may express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy. 33
- The best leaders are those who encourage feedback from the people whom they lead.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and sup 33
- Undergraduate students majoring in Business or in the Sciences should not be required to take any courses in the Humanities since those courses won’t benefit their future careers. 66
- Undergraduate students majoring in Business or in the Sciences should not be required to take any courses in the Humanities since those courses won’t benefit their future careers. 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 260, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'agrees'?
Suggestion: agrees
... masses and their criticism. It totally agree that one should see through their own i...
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Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... All the new ideas including revolutions , including ban on bad social practice li...
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Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
...g energy and time in it. If one cede to peoples doubts and criticism, they will never a...
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Line 5, column 232, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...r able to do what they want because you cant keep everyone happy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 58.6224719101 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 2235.4752809 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 222.0 442.535393258 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05855855856 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70523662815 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 215.323595506 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.4932671777 126% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 704.065955056 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9527400814 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.777777778 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167019425642 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695324676792 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505935671534 0.0758088955206 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111109941807 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555982621753 0.0667264976115 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 100.480337079 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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