Those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others may express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy.
Those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others may express, are the one who tend to leave a legacy. This statement has been proved if we look back at our history.
People who implement the revolutionary ideas they have envisioned, despite being subject to criticism of many, have always been remembered throughout history. One key quality of these people has been the ability to improve on their ideas based on the criticism received. These revolutionaries work towards their goal assiduously because they believe in their ideas, irrespective of whether someone else does. For example, Bill Gates , who's among the wealthiest all over the world, realised the revolution software can bring in this world. IBM who was at the time know as the "Big Brother" of the tech industry, failed to recognise this revelation and thought of Bill Gates as someone who doesn't have a modicum of knowledge about the industry. But Bill Gates persevered against all odds, went against IBM, and gave the world a present named Microsoft. Microsoft completely changed the way people work by introducing products such as Windows and Microsoft Office. Bill Gates envisioned an era of software development being at the vanguard of breakthrough technology and saw it through.
Another example we can take is that of Google, built by two scholars pursuing their PhDs who just wanted a better way to index the web pages available on the internet make it easily searchable. When they invented their trademark "Page-Rank" algorithm, the idea of a company that would in future be worth hundreds of billions hadn't even crossed their minds. They just wanted to make search for web pages better. After being rejected by prominent leaders of the tech industry like Yahoo, Google remained obdurate and made sure that their technology reaches the public. Rest as we know is history, Yahoo soon became almost obsolete with google introducing other competitive products like Gmail.
Still, it's not necessary that if someone believes in their idea and see it through will be tantamount to them being the next Google or Microsoft. One has to learn from the criticism they are facing and know when their idea is impractical.
Conclusively, we could say that history has given us enough proof that if someone believes in their idea and are willing to see it through regardless of what other people think, tend to leave a lasting legacy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, still, as to, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2051.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 401.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11471321696 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76142820933 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568578553616 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2102596985 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.944444444 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2777777778 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 5.21951772744 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37917957926 0.243740707755 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119130650929 0.0831039109588 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.214744519097 0.0758088955206 283% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273067908715 0.150359130593 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.207839373246 0.0667264976115 311% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.