True beauty is found not in the exceptional but in the commonplace.
Where true beauty can be found, In commonplace or in exceptional? Some people would argue that true beauty is in commonplace like trees and flowers, However, others would state that true beauty only exists in exceptional. After weighing the evidence, it is certain that true beauty belongs to exceptional places like Siose Pol and Takht Jamshid, not in commonplaces.
Siose Pol is one of the most beautiful and exceptional bridges in the world. This bridge is in Isfahan and many tourists visit this exceptional artwork annually. It is so beautiful that many people stand for hours to watch and enjoy it. Its beauty is more noticeable when the Zayanderood river has water and you can see the bridge reflection on the water. Especially at night the reflection of Siose Pol blends with the reflection of the moon and creates an exceptional scene. There are many bridges in Iran, but they are common and have no noticeable beauty to enjoy, clearly Siose Pol proves that beauty is in exceptional.
One should not think that beauty only can be found in a common scene or a picture. Beauty can be found in rich culture and history too. Like Siose Pol, Korush tomb is the obvious example of exceptional beauty. Korosh is one of the most famous Iranian kings, whose tomb is in Takhte Jamshid in Shiraz city. Although Korosh tomb is not a very big place, it has a very rich history. History of an era when Iran had a great and just king, who ruled over a great kingdom. This tomb remembers the Iranian that they have a great nation with a great history. So, this relation and sensation between Iranian and their king is exceptional. This noticeable tomb is very different from common tombs which have a little historical and cultural value. This example clearly shows that beauty only can be found in exceptional places, not in common places.
Some people might say that common places are more beautiful than exceptional places. For example, they say that enjoying a sunset or walking in a jungle gives positive energy and helps to think and concentrate better. Although in some cases they are right, after a while these places become boring and lose their attraction.
As the bulk of evidence shows, the exceptional, not common places have true beauty. Siose Pol bridge and Korosh tomb prove that true beauty lies in exceptional, which not only are beautiful but also have historical and cultural values. After few visits common scenes become boring but, the emotional and sensational values of exceptional places never bore the visitors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, for example, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2111.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 432.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88657407407 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50426483788 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453703703704 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 658.8 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0185044411 60.3974514979 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.44 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.28 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44 5.21951772744 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373174517151 0.243740707755 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116210698173 0.0831039109588 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143013821305 0.0758088955206 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229829327878 0.150359130593 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1718644223 0.0667264976115 258% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 14.1392134831 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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