True success can be measured primarily in terms of the goals on sets for one self.
Success is one of most inspiring moment for the people and other supporters in their lives. Success can be very abstract depending on what people pursue. Some people might pursue success for money, their reputation, or authority. This is general view of the people making an effort to their goal. Whereas statement showed true success is only measured by itself, the response is that success itself is not only the case for measure. Success is the progress, which starts from the beginning to final. Success is for the people who are making earthshaking and groundbreaking view of the society. Success is another commencement for new and future trial. There are so many values for measurement of success, but these will collaborate when measuring the view of success.
Success is the progress from beginning to final work. There is dictum that ‘when you start the beginning, you came along the half of overall road.’ Just as people start doing their work, this is the step of the success. Outside of the world, people don’t know how to understand key of success. Moreover, there are many times of failure, or destiny doesn’t give you any chance to go forward. This type of adversity is pretty normal everyone, but successful people would say failure is another start and problem is solution. Hence beginning step and hardship should be valued in success.
Success is the people who are making earthshaking and groundbreaking vision of the society. In sports, the legend of basketball player, Micheal Jordan, is showing a shocking maverick. He made lots of astonishing moment of play that everyone doesn’t expect. Even some rumor used told people he can fly at least 3 seconds. He is one of humankind but with much of hard work and much of hardship, and he made it very successful in his basketball life. However, if he doesn’t have any support from his crew, if he doesn’t make any valuable tactics with his coach, then he wouldn’t survive in his basketball life. Because of their support and endorsement, he made himself legend in basketball.
Lastly, Success is another commencement for new and future trial. When success is only the meaning of final work, Success is not only the final but also is giving another direction for its work, which means it will continuously affect future work and goal. As success is great moment, people will endorse and cooperate for the future, and it will help to understand as people gathering new information.
In conclusion, success is not just measurement of all time, but true value of success is when it includes so many and much of points which are beginning point, hardships, collaboration, vision, another commencement. These values can’t be easily measured but it will be easy to understand how much effort will imbue into success.
- Claim: Imagination is a more valuable asset than experience.Reason: people who lack experience are free to imagine what is possible without the constraints of established habits and attitudes. 66
- Some people believe that in order to thrive, a society must put its own overall success before the well-being of its individual citizens. Others believe that the well-being of a society can only be measured by the general welfare of all its people. 50
- The following appeared in a memo from a vice president of Quiot Manufacturing.During the past year, Quiot Manufacturing had 30 percent more on-the-job accidents than at the nearby Panoply Industries plant, where the work shifts are one hour shorter than o 50
- Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leader must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently 66
- Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws. 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 595, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...and groundbreaking view of the society. Success is another commencement for new and fut...
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Line 3, column 544, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... another start and problem is solution. Hence beginning step and hardship should be v...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, so, then, whereas, at least, even so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2369.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 468.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06196581197 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76993221437 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463675213675 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 711.9 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.740449438202 270% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.8070341546 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7407407407 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 10.2758426966 224% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254947343314 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831173353778 0.0831039109588 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626188235798 0.0758088955206 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159310023565 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0975078790981 0.0667264976115 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.