To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
I agree with author if anyone want to know the importance of society he or she must concentrate on its major city. Usually, whatever changes we see in the society is directly proportionate to its major cities because society always concentrate its major city development and to make it glorious.
Every nation or society will always concentrate on the major cities and neglect its backward cities. The society will be always in competition with other society, there main intention is to develop the society like increase the economy, living condition of people, success rate in employment and many more. Hence, they always concentrate on its major city which gives profit and make them stand out from other society. Therefore they always show negligence towards the backward cities and never to try to improve there condition.
For example if we take living condition of India, the government always concentrate on developing its metropolitan city like Mumbai, Delhi, Bangalore and many more. Therefore all the people from backward cities want experience the living condition of developed city hence, the move to the major city and search for opportunity which helps them to grow and succeed in their life. Later they will settle in the developed city because there will no opportunity in backward cities. Therefore, the developed cities will more polluted and populated because of the government negligence towards backward cities.
In conclusion its definitely to understand how society works we have to understand its major city first because they always neglect the backward cities. But the society should treat all cities equally then only its helps to become developed nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 31, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
I agree with author if anyone want to know the importance of society he or...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...make them stand out from other society. Therefore they always show negligence towards the...
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Line 6, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...prove there condition. For example if we take living condition of India, the g...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...Mumbai, Delhi, Bangalore and many more. Therefore all the people from backward cities wan...
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Line 8, column 15, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...wards backward cities. In conclusion its definitely to understand how society wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, then, therefore, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 19.5258426966 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 269.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30483271375 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62374536592 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 215.323595506 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472118959108 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7378986803 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.916666667 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.21951772744 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179727239938 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873761395304 0.0831039109588 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710775868193 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140498956403 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574413482949 0.0667264976115 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 100.480337079 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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