"Unfortunately, the media tend to highlight what is sensational at the moment.
Society would be better served if the media reported or focused more fully on events and
trends that will ultimately have the most long-term significance. "
In this paragraph speaker claims that the media tend to highlight what is sensational at the moment
while speaker thinks that society would be better served if the media reported or focused more fully on
events and trends that will ultimately have the most long term significance by which I disagree,
as i think importance of media in day to day life is very important which covers the news and on going
events around the world.
I strongly agree that media plays specific role as people following media beleives in news they
shown and are known what is going around the world.
For example international media covering the news
of the attacks happening in different parts of Europe such as Brussells , Paris ,Germany which we might think
is the tend of sensational at the moment but behind that the reason of covering the news
is important for the long term significance as it relates to the same events of the attacker in different
parts of world such like Syria,United States and other eastern countries which is affecting world peace.
Secondly for the local media sensational news is as important as long term significance for example due to
Britain exit from Europe union many other counties of world have faced economical effects which might effect
in their long term Economical condition and variations in their development and foreign policies.
So to cover sensational news plays major role in long term significance.
To be aware media can be manupulative also sometimes; as these days due to many news channel and media
focusing on specific events among them some media distorting events in different way to the people which might be in
contrast to real life events to seek attention or to control people ability and their views.
For example the media of country North Korea doesnot allow any other international news to be shown to people
and people living in that country have no idea whats going on in the world as local media reports them with fake
news.
Most important part of media is to share sensational moments or events by which people follow media on
regularly basis ; which is a part of long term significance news also.
Hence i conclude my issue by strongly agreeing to the media tend to highlight what is sensation at moment
as they are important part in our daily activities and for better understanding of the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...m significance by which I disagree, as i think importance of media in day to day...
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Line 4, column 95, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...ery important which covers the news and on going events around the world. I strongly...
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Line 10, column 72, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ferent parts of Europe such as Brussells , Paris ,Germany which we might think is...
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Line 10, column 80, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...arts of Europe such as Brussells , Paris ,Germany which we might think is the ten...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...Paris ,Germany which we might think is the tend of sensational at the moment but behind...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , United
...ifferent parts of world such like Syria,United States and other eastern countries whic...
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Line 16, column 103, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...ve faced economical effects which might effect in their long term Economical conditio...
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Line 20, column 76, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...ve also sometimes; as these days due to many news channel and media focusing on spe...
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Line 20, column 76, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much news', 'a good deal of news'.
Suggestion: much news; a good deal of news
...ve also sometimes; as these days due to many news channel and media focusing on specific...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
...ple living in that country have no idea whats going on in the world as local media re...
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Line 28, column 66, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...s a part of long term significance news also. Hence i conclude my issue by strongly...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...t of long term significance news also. Hence i conclude my issue by strongly agreein...
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Line 29, column 7, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ong term significance news also. Hence i conclude my issue by strongly agreeing ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'i think', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.308612440191 0.240241500013 128% => OK
Verbs: 0.136363636364 0.157235817809 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.114832535885 0.0880659088768 130% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0358851674641 0.0497285424764 72% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0311004784689 0.0444667217837 70% => OK
Prepositions: 0.153110047847 0.12292977631 125% => OK
Participles: 0.0406698564593 0.0406280797675 100% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.59347831901 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0382775119617 0.030933414821 124% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0693779904306 0.0997080785238 70% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0143540669856 0.0249443105267 58% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0287081339713 0.0148568991511 193% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2374.0 2732.02544248 87% => OK
No of words: 404.0 452.878318584 89% => OK
Chars per words: 5.87623762376 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.299504950495 0.366273622748 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.207920792079 0.280924506359 74% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.155940594059 0.200843997647 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.113861386139 0.132149295362 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59347831901 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 219.290929204 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.443069306931 0.48968727796 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.1824362217 55.4138127331 85% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6194690265 44% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 44.8888888889 23.380412469 192% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 123.049623634 59.4972553346 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 263.777777778 141.124799967 187% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.8888888889 23.380412469 192% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.22222222222 0.674092028746 181% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.94800884956 505% => There are something wrong with the essay format.
Language errors: 13.0 5.21349557522 249% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 65.6809680968 51.4728631049 128% => OK
Elegance: 2.47058823529 1.64882698954 150% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.486143775389 0.391690518653 124% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.199131763264 0.123202303941 162% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0608715865214 0.077325440228 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.547984918172 182% => Sentence paragraph similarity is high.
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 2.50231561462e-16 0.149214159877 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.256535921227 0.161403998019 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146921185571 0.0892212321368 165% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.0982152554033 0.385218514788 25% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0853760960531 0.0692045440612 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184718655573 0.275328986314 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121926984632 0.0653680567796 187% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 8.0 13.5995575221 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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