Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study.
The assertion states that for every student it should be mandatory to take courses extra courses other than their major and university should design a augmented course structure according to it. I agree with the assetion because in this rapidly growing world people have become multitalented and have knowledge of many new fields. So , it becomes very mandatory for student to learn new courses to match up with the pace of world.
Firstly,In today’s world with everyday advancement in research many new fields have been invented that are very closely related to eachother. So it is essential to learn all of them for a student to excel in his career.Such fields are quite intrinsic to eachother. And as the world have become very competitive and many multinational companies hire employees who are knowledge of multipal fields besides their core major. Thus it becomes mandatory for student to learn all the new courses in order to flourish in his/her career. For example, if a student has a major as political science as his/her major than its is very necessary for pupil to learn other fields like sociology, literature science , sports, environment science and many more. Hence , the student can only gain the knowledge of other fields at the time of their graduation. As the students at time of choosing their might not be aware of these courses it becomes responsibility of universities to make them understand necessity of such courses.
Secondly , if the studentis exposed to more than one field of study than it becomes an opportunity for student to dive deep into their desired field. For example , if the student has a course of Artificial intelligence as major and he/she wants to explore more about it they can easily do it. University should make student aware about their respective courses which is very favourable to student aas they have have many eclectives to explore and carry it as a profession. For example, the famous scientist pravnav mistry wanted to become an a professor but it was his university who guided him and made him aware of very fields of study which made him a vice president at Samsung.
However, every coin has two sides. In this highly esoteric academic schedule if the student is given many new courses to be completed than there might be the case that a student might have only tangential knowlegde of every field and become a dilletantte which might ruin his/her entire career and their future will be compromised. Further , if the university itself who has developed an commitee to select the numbers of courses for student are not even highly educated and can not decide the best fields of study for any child than it can be very deleterious for pupils future.
In final analysis, it is very essential to learn many new courseworks other than a student major to make them truly educated. And university should make variety of require course that can make student education more balance making it flexible of student to learn parallely with their coursework.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2510.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 506.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9604743083 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7428307748 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66175612683 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.436758893281 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 822.6 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8202391503 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.105263158 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6315789474 23.4991977007 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26315789474 5.21951772744 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317685317847 0.243740707755 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119106457509 0.0831039109588 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808336803147 0.0758088955206 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211958258577 0.150359130593 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244231667836 0.0667264976115 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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