The unknown are necessary.
The term unknown seems to have two meanings. First, some unknown things are the things that we, at the present stage, do not know, but in the future we may be able to know. We do not know whether the Atlantis civilization really existed on Earth, however, advances of our archaeology and exploration instruments will let us find the truth. Second, some unknown things are eternally unknown because they belong to the realm of our existential limitations. Even if science and technology advance to the extreme, we cannot know about fourth dimension world because we are intrinsically third dimension existences. So, the statement "the unknown is necessary" has to be addressed in these two perspectives, and I think that in both perspectives, the unknown are necessary.
In regard to the first meaning, the effort for the advancement of human civilization is analogous to the story of a child trying to grab a rainbow in his hand. Strictly speaking, humans cannot grab a rainbow, however, what I am saying is that like a rainbow which gives a child an objective to grab it in his hand, the existence of the unknown has made human beings eager to establish a heaven-like civilization on Earth. If this child had no rainbow to grab, he would not make his journey. Just like this, if humans did not have the unknown to try to know about, the advancement of human civilization could not make a start.
Regarding the second meaning, unknown things we cannot know make us think about the value of spiritual things. If humans were God-like beings who are not restricted to the unknown, they could not learn the value of humbleness. Rather, because we cannot be omniscient, we can learn the virtue of being humble. Even Issac Newton said, "What we know is a drop, what we don't know is an ocean." If humans were free from death, they could not the miracle of being alive. So, the fact that there are unknown things we cannot know eternally has taught us lots of invaluable spiritual values.
In conclusion, it is my thought that the existence of the unknown has given humans many things. Humans would not have been able to establish present developed civilizations and reach present spiritual maturations without it. Considering it, the unknown are thought to have a great value which cannot be underestimated.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 57, Rule ID: KNOW_NOW[5]
Message: Did you mean 'now'?
Suggestion: now
...econd meaning, unknown things we cannot know make us think about the value of spirit...
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Line 5, column 373, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
..., 'What we know is a drop, what we dont know is an ocean.' If humans were ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, really, regarding, second, so, third, as to, i think, in conclusion, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1936.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 394.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91370558376 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8269144457 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477157360406 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9734624319 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.555555556 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 5.21951772744 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229728481541 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886308730455 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908418887638 0.0758088955206 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141101001124 0.150359130593 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813685396128 0.0667264976115 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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