Some people believe the more knowledge we gain, the more comprehensible things will be. Though it is true in some context, things always become complicated when we deal with some subjects or even things related to human-beings.
If we study some profound subjects, we will find out the more we read, the more difficult topics we will encounter, especially for some subjects that a lot of experts are delving into. For example, when we first learn math in elementary school, we found it easy as math was everything regarding "add", "multiply." We took a little effort on it and usually got good grades in return. However, when we learnt advanced calculus in college, we realized math is not what we thought before. It involves many complex principles and intricate counting.
In addition, when we learn more knowledge in our work, things will not always go as understandable as we expected because we have to put ourselves in other people's shoes. For example, when we are engineers in a company, we are only responsible for our duties. After we become senior engineers, we need to scrutinize more programming languages to teach new comers. As we are promoted to chef technological operator, we not only need to sharpen our own skills but also know more details about other teams. Besides, we also have to socialize with leaders from other teams. Everything is getting complicated when we get more knowledge and stand in the higher position.
Admittedly, there are some kind of work that will get easier as we learn more, especially for works regarding repetitive work. Once people are familiar with SOP of the job, they are able to work independently. For example, my mom used to be a operator, and she told me it only took her one week to memorize every step of her job. For another example, the waiter will feel everything is easy after finishing his training.
To conclude, when we acquire more knowledge, we will surely realize things will become harder, though people could still when learning repetitive works.
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- TPO31- Integrated writing 65
- TPO- 54 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 75
- TPO28- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Parents today are more involved in their children's education than parents were in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- In an attempt to improve highway safety, Prunty County last year lowered its speed limit from 55 to 45 miles per hour on all county highways. But this effort has failed: the number of accidents has not decreased, and, based on reports by the highway patro 45
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 242, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ndently. For example, my mom used to be a operator, and she told me it only took ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, regarding, so, still, for example, in addition, kind of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 342.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99415204678 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88818444426 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543859649123 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.10617977528 322% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2041504051 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.470588235 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1176470588 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 5.21951772744 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213138990775 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086573392223 0.0831039109588 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506966901126 0.0758088955206 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141903263046 0.150359130593 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387474092341 0.0667264976115 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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