We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from people whose views contradict our own.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The choice of preferring to learn from someone who is much more like you than someone who contradicts you isn't trivial one. In fact, people tend to learn and grasp early when taught by a person who share similar ideologies that as of the learner. The prompts recommends that it is easier to learn from people having similar principles than from those who don't. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the recommendation and suggest that we should try more and more to learn from people who have alike mindset.
To begin with, people may maintain cordial relation with someone who isn't like minded but wouldn't prefer them for learning new things. This phenomenon is based on human psychology , as each and everyone of us feel need of belongingness when it comes to learn something. For instance , we all are well aware of being social animals , we started dwelling together since very ancient time. Consequently , this similarity in thought process lead has lead human race to develop at an enormous rate. Above example, illustrates that sharing similar mindsets has been root cause of human development as similar minds come together in order to create something unimaginable and progressing towards betterment. Perhaps, depicting a strong linkage that people tend to learn with more ease from someone they connect with by means of having coinciding thoughts.
Further, we can observe that our society is based on some fundamental principles on which whole human - kind relies on. For example, each organization have some values or morals attach to them. These are in existence because each and everyone in the organization share similar views which lead to their communitive success. When working on collaborative projects whole team's views must be aligned in order to fulfill the deliverables. Furthermore, the environment in the organization stays pleasant and encourages everyone to excel and learn in collaborative manner. From this example , it shows how important it is to share same views when working or learning together.
We might learn different perspective from some one who contradicts with our views or outlook but learning with them would be difficult . As there are probabilistically more chances of quarrelling rather than learning together. Therefore, its fun and enriching when we learn from someone alike rather than from who contradicts are views.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in fact, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1987.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 381.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21522309711 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82051568812 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551181102362 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.4420130739 60.3974514979 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.578947368 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0526315789 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94736842105 5.21951772744 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329772896169 0.243740707755 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102867413887 0.0831039109588 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688127560441 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210309395489 0.150359130593 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570519844226 0.0667264976115 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.