The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
A Society is a community that revolves around "social interaction" between people and their leaders. Thus, I agree with the speaker that well being of a society is enhanced only when its people question the authority as a society is bound to fail if people blindly follow their leaders or government , as no leader can always make the right choices and may take some wrong actions. So, people should question the authority in such cases so that the authorities can learn from their mistakes and mend their ways.
A society needs both a good leader as well as public consensus of the leader and his actions.For instance,we can look at the example of James Buchanan, 15th American president who was an effective leader but during the time of civil war failed miserably in taking the right decisions and as a result led America to a downfall in overall economic market and thus was questioned and henceforth replaced by Abraham Lincoln, who became the 16th American president and led a America through the most difficult times and set it to a right path.If people in this kept following Buchanan blindly, America's future would have been jeopardized.So, sometimes when the leader and government prove to be ineffective ,people should question them and even if needed replace them.
But this might not be the case every time as no leader and can always make the most favorable decisions as sometimes they might need a little more time and support from the people before delivering a good outcome.For instance, it took many years for Mahatma Gandhi before actually he was successful in his agenda of freeing India from British rule. This was only possible because people stood by his side and supported him throughout.
So finally, to sum up in my opinion it is important in a society for people to question their authority but sometimes they need to have faith in their leaders ,as failure is a part of upcoming success. So it is important for people to understand and connect with their leader so that they can understand his motives and stand by his side.So a balance must be maintained as to a attain and progressive and developing society.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'finally', 'hence', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'as to', 'for instance', 'as a result', 'as well as', 'in my opinion', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.238578680203 0.240241500013 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.152284263959 0.157235817809 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0634517766497 0.0880659088768 72% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0583756345178 0.0497285424764 117% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0685279187817 0.0444667217837 154% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.124365482234 0.12292977631 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0406091370558 0.0406280797675 100% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.693366624 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0228426395939 0.030933414821 74% => OK
Particles: 0.00253807106599 0.0016655270985 152% => OK
Determiners: 0.0989847715736 0.0997080785238 99% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0304568527919 0.0249443105267 122% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0152284263959 0.0148568991511 103% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2154.0 2732.02544248 79% => OK
No of words: 368.0 452.878318584 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.85326086957 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.364130434783 0.366273622748 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.263586956522 0.280924506359 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.179347826087 0.200843997647 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.114130434783 0.132149295362 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.693366624 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 219.290929204 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532608695652 0.48968727796 109% => OK
Word variations: 58.3124237294 55.4138127331 105% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6194690265 39% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 46.0 23.380412469 197% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 204.921783859 59.4972553346 344% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 269.25 141.124799967 191% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.0 23.380412469 197% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.0 0.674092028746 297% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.21349557522 269% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 72.3586956522 51.4728631049 141% => OK
Elegance: 1.44545454545 1.64882698954 88% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305353372518 0.391690518653 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.182315147708 0.123202303941 148% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0969387830904 0.077325440228 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.710292876083 0.547984918172 130% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.189472883847 0.149214159877 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155810875685 0.161403998019 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121530503379 0.0892212321368 136% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.308610267562 0.385218514788 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.068143330637 0.0692045440612 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206864066757 0.275328986314 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109910721785 0.0653680567796 168% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.4325221239 38% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 7.22455752212 55% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 13.5995575221 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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