The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
While unbounded disobedience is detrimental to the development of society, the well-being of society will generally be uplifted when a large fraction of its people question authority. The suspicion to authority is the source of democracy, on which most the governments in the world relies on. In fields like science and arts, the question to former authority provides sources for future development.
The government's goal is aimed at the general welfare of its people. however, such aim cannot be smoothly attained. Historical accounts have reveal that under despotic reign, deception and frauds teem with the society. when the government's goal is altered by its governor, its people should have their right to disobey it. In the late 20th century, African Americans are discriminated in the United States, they cannot process equal rights with white men. The reform of the discriminative policy is initiated by social movement arising from the common people. The channel for disenfranchised people to express their inequality is a important propeling force in the societal development.
In the science society, almost each and every breakthough comes with questions and defiance. Since science is a arduous journey exploring the unknown world, and previous rules might only be a approximate version of a more general situation. once we set our feet on the ground that on one has ever stepped on, we then are obliged to break the chains from the authority. Sometimes it is an improvement on the old theory, which is more readily accepted by the authority. however, the paradigm shift, such as Darwin's evolution theory, is more aberrant in the old pundits' eyes, which would lead to a fiercer opposition. Hence, the bravery and determination of questioning the authority should be encouraged rather than extinguished.
Furthermore, the core of art's spirit is to abstain the old rules and embrace the new ones. once certain art form is generally accepted by the public, the pioneers, named as avant-garde, are to experiment brand-new art forms. The disobedience of artists is marked by the misunderstanding of their contemporaries. Few avant-gardes were publicly renowned before their death. On the contrary, in medieval times, only devious paintings are allowed, and any attempt to create an alternate form of painting was regarded as defiance to the Gods. The development of art was hinder for nearly a thousand years.
In conclusion, the well-being of society can be improved by questioning its authority. The defiance can inject new blood into a stagnant society and refresh the aura. On the contrary, a stifle on defiance will suffocate society's growth.
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- TPO 52 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
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Suggestion: However
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Message: Use past participle here: 'revealed'.
Suggestion: revealed
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Suggestion: When
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Suggestion: Once
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Suggestion: Once
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, so, then, well, while, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2252.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 424.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31132075472 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99547243496 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558962264151 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 701.1 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 15.0 4.99550561798 300% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2685076311 60.3974514979 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.08 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.96 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300022597568 0.243740707755 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719461684232 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127277623869 0.0758088955206 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174109346094 0.150359130593 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121800448198 0.0667264976115 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 100.480337079 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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