The chart below gives information on the global sale of hybrid vehichle between 2006 and 2009. Summrise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart below shows the comparasion among Japan, USA and other countries in global hybrid vehicle sales between 2006 and 2009. Japan was the most improvement country that moved from the lowest position in 2006 to the highest position in 2009.
To begin with, Japan was rose dramatically year by year from 50.000 (2006), 60.000 (2007), 75.000 (2008), and peaked at 345.000 in the end of 2009. Besides, growth trend of Japan was leading Japan to the highest rank among other countries in 2009.
Next, we can see from the chart that bar trend of USA was fluctuated in high level above 200.000. USA rose sharply from 250.000 in 2006 to 350.000 in 2007. Others, the result of 350.000 was the highest sales over four years. Unfortunately, USA declined slowly to 320.000 in 2008 and 295.000 in 2009 respectively.
Other countries except Japan and USA went up slowly from 55.000 (2006), 70.000 (2007), 80.000 (2008) and 100.000 in the end of sales in 2009. Thus, this group became the third rank of sales ini 2009.
To sum up, japan was the country that shocked us with their achievement of sales from the lowest rank to the highest rank in 2009. After all, the total sales of USA was the greates one in 1.270.000, followed by Japan in 530.000 and other countries in 305.000.
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Japan was rose dramatically year by year
Japan rose dramatically year by year
Sentence: The bar chart below shows the comparasion among Japan, USA and other countries in global hybrid vehicle sales between 2006 and 2009.
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