The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparisons where relevant.

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The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparisons where relevant.

The provided pie diagrams show the proportions of populations, divided into three age groups, in Yemen and Italy in 2000 and also predicts for 2050. Overall, the proportions are dramatic difference in two countries, especially in 0-14 and 60+ ages.

Regarding the youngest group, people in 0-14 ages were about half of the Yemen populations in 2000 and the percentages will decrease to 37 per cent in 2050. Conversely, people in this ages were the tiny minority of Italy populations at 14.3 per cent in 2000 and 11.5 per cent predicts for 2050.

Turning to consider about middle ages, it was slight difference in two states in 2000 at 46.3 per cent in Yemen and 61.6 per cent in Italy. However, there were a different trends forecast for 2050 because it climbed to over half of populations in Yemen while in Italy, it decreased to lower half.

In the oldest age, it was noticeable contrast. In Italy, these were one fourth of citizens in 2000 and will be nearly half in 2050. On the contrary in Yemen, people in 60+ ages were only tiny minority of populations at 3.6 per cent and it will rise gradually in 2050 at 5.7 per cent.

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