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The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
Given are a group of diagrams illustrating the production of cement and the manufacturing process of concrete where cement is used as a key ingredient.
During the cement-making process, according to the first diagram, there are four mian stages. First of all, limestone and clay is crushed into powder by a crusher in the first stage. Then, in the second stage, the powder will be blended in a mixer before being transported into the rotating heater for fire heating in the third stage. Once heated, in the last phase the powder is fed to grinder and ground into cement, which will be packaged in ...
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