The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The chart shows the changes in wheat exports in three different areas, per year, from 1985 to 1990.
In 1985, the country who has the highest export for wheat, approximately 19-million tonnes, was Canada. Below Canada’s export volume, European exported about 17-million tonnes wheat while Australia just export 15-million tonnes, the lowest export. During this period, wheat export in Canada fluctuated. The export volume peaked at 25 million tonnes in 1998, but the next following year, 1989, wheat export fell down extremely to below 15 million tonnes, the lowest volume during the six-year per...
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