In many countries, schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? what solutions can you suggest?

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In many countries, schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? what solutions can you suggest?

Today, it is evidently noticed that public awareness regarding students' behavior has substantially increased in comparison with a recent past. However, bad behavior is believed to be the negative effects of novel society, it could be seen as a valid means of a natural reaction to treatments of parents and schools.

A chief reason for behaving unbalance as a child could be attributed to the way parents breed their child. Wrong way of raising a child may be rooted in lack of information about effects of a parent's behavior on his/her children. In this regard it could be beneficial, whether for children or parents, to attend some social classes which are held in educational centers.

A contributory factor that effects on inappropriate behavior of a child are weak relationship of her/his parents with each another. Parents who don't have a constructive relationship might influence their children unwantedly, especially when they don't try to compensate their mistakes. Consequently, the relationships might be so ice-cold that child feels lonely and as a result she/he will be aggressive. Parents could register in some psychology classes or for instant, Non-Governmental Organizations (NGOs) association to learn how to manage their relationship with their children and spouse.

Last but not least, a reason for bad behaving among students could be born from absence of ability to communicate with their fellows and partners. Many of students in teenage time might encounter with this situation in which depression will find new connotation and thus has a gloomy impact on them. School and parents could play a significant role in this part as they are able to teach students and children how to make a friend and assist them to be more social.

To recap, parents and schools and overall society, could influence these future decision-makers because new generation is always a result of older generations' nation. All and all, it is always wise to turn to the experts for more consultation.

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