Most successful inventions do not rely on complicated technology. In fact, some of the world’s greatest inventions have been very simple things.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Invention can be known as an object, idea, or system that can be accomplish and useful in the field of human life. Invention in the recent year for most of people related to an electronic or machine new founded, thereby we forget some simple invention which is very useful especially in or daily.
Notwithstanding, we usually forget the simple invention which is the important part of the big things. Our movement, indirectly depend on a latex which make rubber become tire. Rubber is also using for many areal in our live, rubber as bag material, computer hard case, frame of glasses, and cellular phone casing.
In other area simple invention rising and helpfully needed. For example in the office, we also need paper clips, pens, pencils, document folder, and sticky tape. While this stuff is simple, it does mean that the function simple too. Other invention such as syringe, injection, gloves, and face mask is some example of the great invention too in medical area. All of the medical stuff needed to make themselves and the patient keep sterilize, so these stuff totally support for healing.
In conclusion, something which can improve and helpful in our lives can be called the great invention even their look simple. Not only the fabulous machines or electronic devices can call the great invention, but also something useful indeed. As far as my description when we were ill, cellular phone cannot be inject some medication to cured us.
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Sentence: Invention in the recent year for most of people related to an electronic or machine new founded, thereby we forget some simple invention which is very useful especially in or daily.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to machine and new
Description: A preposition is not usually followed by a conjunction, coordinating
Suggestion: Refer to in and or
In other area simple invention rising and helpfully needed.
Description: what is the verb for this sentence?
the function simple too.
the function is simple too.
Other invention such as
Other inventions such as
Sentence: In conclusion, something which can improve and helpful in our lives can be called the great invention even their look simple.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to look and simple
Sentence: As far as my description when we were ill, cellular phone cannot be inject some medication to cured us.
Description: The fragment were ill , is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace ill with adjective
Description: An adjective is not usually followed by a determiner/pronoun, singular or plural
Suggestion: Refer to inject and some
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to to and cured
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