News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?
We get information about what is happening these days from the news on television and in the newspaper. However, we do not look through and watch all the news in a newspaper and on TV. Therefore, editors choose the best news to capture attention of audiences or readers. In my opinion, editors should pay more attention to bad news. In this case, the number of bad news in the future reduces, for people are warned by news.
Sometimes when you are watching news on TV there is only news about the activities of government or a kind of festival which was held in a school or university, the sam...
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