Should the same laws which prohibit the sale and consumption of heroin be applied to tobacco?
Nowadays, one of the most important issues is the sale and consumption of heroin and this prey on most countries. Countries struggle with this problem and try to deal with it whereas to prohibit this problem is not still possible. Now tobacco is also dangerous for people’s health like heroin. Tobacco has spread almost all countries of the world and many people use it. Some countries want to apply laws which prohibit the sale and consumption of heroin to tobacco.
To begin with benefits of this deed, cigarette is made from tobacco and now a great number of people of the world use it. Experts say that each cigarette scale down person’s life for fifteen minutes and also it bring about cancer, thus a person dies the cause of illness which tobacco creates every five seconds. Tobacco is used by people profusely in the developed countries such as Turkey, China and German, so these countries search the solution of this problem.
Secondly, people who use tobacco or cigarette harm others especially children a lot. Taking breath with air in which there is cigarette smoke is equal smoking two cigarettes. Tobacco is used public places as well and breathing the smell of tobacco is inescapable, so such strict laws should be applied to tobacco.
On the other hand, users of tobacco are not on these thoughts and they have their own views. They think that giving up cigarette can have a bad influence on their health because their body is used to tobacco in the long-term. If users of tobacco wriggle out of it suddenly, it is able to take a toll on their health and cause worse problems.
In conclusion, If laws prohibit the sale and consumption of tobacco, it may be one of the efficiently ways to cope with this issue. Anyway, while such laws are being accepted, the statement should think about users of tobacco. It is necessary that people should keep off from such bad habits and all countries are expected to sample to solve these problems.
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Sentence: In conclusion, If laws prohibit the sale and consumption of tobacco, it may be one of the efficiently ways to cope with this issue.
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