Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Crime and punishment are inseparable one another. If there is a proof that someone is involved in a crime, he or she will get a punishment to make him or her be cured of such bad habit. Most of people agree on the implementation of punishment to control crime’s rate. However, among these people, there is a debate on how to decide proper punishment for criminals. Some people believe that there are some factors such as circumstances and motivation in committing crime which should be considered to determine the punishment. Meanwhile, some other people believe that there should be fixed punishme...
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Sentence: Crime and punishment are inseparable one another.
Description: The fragment are inseparable one is rare
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No. of Different Words: 160 200
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 340 350
No. of Characters: 1575 1500
No. of Different Words: 160 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.294 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.632 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.62 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 78 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 47 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 37 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.937 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.385 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.584 0.50
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