Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Essay topics:

Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

That is no denying that upbringing children become a good member is play a crucial role in modern society. In my opinion, both of parenting and schooling have responsibility to achieve this goal. The reasons are presented as follows.

Until children attend to school, parents have a long period of time to contact with their child at home. During this time, the basic rules should be established and obeyed such as respect, manner, cooperation and so on. Parents must be set good examples for their kids, which mean that children always observational learning and modeling to their primary caregiver. Therefore, parents have responsible for educating their own children to learn the correct values and remedy the improper behaviors.

However, teaching children to know about the society not only entirely rely on parenting but also depend on schooling. School, a place full of different background students, is a small society that included widely individuals. In this society, pupils’ behaviors are restricted by school’s rules, and everyone have an important role in school life. On campus, pupils play with peers, and they can mutual growth from communicating and learning from each other. Schooling provided comprehensive guidance and proper learning opportunity as well, which is a variety of source to help individuals adapting to different circumstance. For instance, develop knowledge, technique, mental, etc.

In summary, I believed that parenting and schooling should co-exist, which have a great influence on children to be good members of society. Both of them have a duty to ensure young generations receive proper education.

Votes
Average: 5.8 (6 votes)
This essay topic by users
Post date Users Rates Link to Content
2014-01-03 muftia anwar 62 view
2014-01-03 wibby.aldryani 65 view
2014-01-02 Fardhani Dwi Aristya Putri 60 view
2014-01-02 rahmiedriyanti 55 view
2013-12-09 sprigidts 65 view
Essay Categories
Essays by user favorite0214 :

Comments

Sentence: That is no denying that upbringing children become a good member is play a crucial role in modern society.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to is and play

Sentence: Therefore, parents have responsible for educating their own children to learn the correct values and remedy the improper behaviors.
Description: The fragment have responsible for is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace responsible with noun

Sentence: On campus, pupils play with peers, and they can mutual growth from communicating and learning from each other.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to can and mutual

everyone have an important role in school life.
everyone has an important role in school life.

flaws:
Sentence Length SD: 4.959 7.5
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.053 0.07
No. of Words: 256 350

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 256 350
No. of Characters: 1344 1500
No. of Different Words: 162 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.25 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.77 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 111 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 83 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 59 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 35 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.067 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.959 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.467 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.309 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.522 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.053 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5