The amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries
The chart shows consumer goods spending in Germany, Italy, France, and Britain. Using thousand pounds sterling, it is tested by personal stereo (PS), tennis racquets (TR), perfumes (P), CDs (C), toys (T), and photographics film (PF). The most spending is in photographic film, and the least average is TR. However, depend on the countries, Britain is the greatest in consumer goods, and the lowest is Germany.
Britain uses money more than 170,000 pounds sterling to buy photographic film, and it is perhaps the most hobby from that inhabitans. The second level in four countries are toys and CDs. They take budget around 150-165 thousand pounds sterling for both. Then, then prefer to consume perfumes, personal stereos, and tennis racquets. People allocate their financial in 150-160 thousand pounds sterling to reach them.
Britain as the most consumer is the leader in all of goods, and vice versa, Germany is the last country which has less inhabitants in spending money to shop.
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Sentence: Using thousand pounds sterling, it is tested by personal stereo PS, tennis racquets TR, perfumes P, CDs C, toys T, and photographics film PF.
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Sentence: Britain uses money more than 170,000 pounds sterling to buy photographic film, and it is perhaps the most hobby from that inhabitans.
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