Cambridge 6-1
Both of graph and table below give the information about water use worldwide and divide into three large catagories : Agricultural, Industrial, and Domestic Use during a century between 1900 and 2000. This report compare about water consumption in Brazil and Congo in 2000 based from the table of information. The comparison will consist both of their population and irrigated land according to : Culture of Farming and Citizen’s highest employment.
Brazil has larger population than Congo, it is approximately 176 million number of population with its 26.900 km² irrigated land. Larger population shows the larger work citizen. That would not happened in Congo because of its small number of population. Although Congo and Brazil are Agriculture countries, its number of population will distinguish their number of water consumption for irrigating. More people mean more land to be irrigated and to be worked by. The fact would not create a doubt of a significant range of number from the accumulated water consumption between those countries. Significant range of number is approximately reach 26.400 km² for irrigated land and over 170 million for population.
From the data and table facts, Agriculture sector is the highest user of water during this century and number of population will affect to the country water consumption, especially according to their culture such as farming cultural, the large industries, and the employment areas over the country. That is all my report.
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Sentence: Both of graph and table below give the information about water use worldwide and divide into three large catagories : Agricultural, Industrial, and Domestic Use during a century between 1900 and 2000.
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Sentence: This report compare about water consumption in Brazil and Congo in 2000 based from the table of information.
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Significant range of number is approximately reach 26.400 km²
Significant range of number approximately reach 26.400 km²
Sentence: Both of graph and table below give the information about water use worldwide and divide into three large catagories : Agricultural, Industrial, and Domestic Use during a century between 1900 and 2000.
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