Cambridge 6 Test 1 Task 1
The line graph shows the number of water use in the world in some sectors which are domestic use, industrial use, and agriculture use, between 1990 and 2000. The table shows the amount of water consumption in Brazil and Congo over 1 year in 2000.
It is clear that the water use in worldwide increase significantly in the period shown, and the highest of water use in worldwide is in agriculture sector which is about 3000 km3 in comparison with other sectors. For water consumption in Brazil and Congo, it is clear that Brazil has the higher water consumption than Congo in year 2000.
In the year 1990, the water consumption in agriculture sector is the highest consumption in comparison with industrial use, and domestic use, which are about 500 km3, 50 km3, and 0 km3 respectively. The water consumption by those sectors increase significantly yet the water use in agriculture sector increase more rapidly than other sectors. By 2000, the water consumption worldwide in agriculture sector reach about 3000 km3 in comparison with industrial use sector and domestic use sector which are about 1000 km3 and 500 km3.
In the year 2000, the water consumption in Brazil is higher than Congo, which is about 359 m3 of water use per person. Brazil has bigger population and irrigated land, which are about 176 million and 26,500 km2, than those of Congo, which are about 5.2 million of people and 100 km2 of irrigated land.
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- Cambridge 6 Test 1 Task 1 60
the water use in worldwide increase significantly
the water use in worldwide increases significantly
The water consumption by those sectors increase significantly yet the water use in agriculture sector increase more rapidly than other sectors.
The water consumption by those sectors increases significantly yet the water use in agriculture sector increases more rapidly than other sectors.
the water consumption worldwide in agriculture sector reach about 3000 km3
the water consumption worldwide in agriculture sector reaches about 3000 km3
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