The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons while relevant.
Both of chart and table below represent the information of water usage worldwide and its intake per person between two countries.
To begin with, the graph portrays global water use by sector, which is divided by three factors, encompassing agriculture, industrial use, and domestic. Those sectors have been projected since 1900, increasing steadily until 2000 altogether. The largest amount of usage occurs to agriculture sector with the raising rate up to approximately 3000 km3, while both of industrial and domestic expenditure have negligible outlay below 1000 km3.
On the other hand, the table provides data of water consumption in Brazil and Congo in 2000. The water outflow per person in Brazil reach around 350 m3, with 176 million population in 26.5000 km2 irrigated land, while Democratic Republic of Congo consumes 8 m3 with 5.2 million inhabitants in 100 km2 total area vice versa.
To sum up, with taking all evidence into account, the water consumption all over the world increased during 1900 until 2000, whereas Brazil has larger consumption rate compared with Congo.
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by sector,
by sectors,
Those sectors have been projected since 1900, increasing steadily until 2000 altogether.
Description: can you re-write this sentence?
during 1900 until 2000,
from 1900 to 2000,
flaws:
The chart could be developed better.
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