The pie chart shows the amount of money spent and received for a year in a children's charity located in the USA.

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The pie chart shows the amount of money spent and received for a year in a children's charity located in the USA.

The pie chart shows the amount of revenue and expenditure over a year of a children’s charity in the USA. There are 6 different sources (donated, community contributions, program revenue, investment income, government grants and other incomes) to generate the income for the USA children’s charity whereas there are only 3 sources of expenditures (program services, fundraising and, management and general).

Overall, it can be seen from the pie chart that, the donated food accounted as the majority of income, while program services accounted for the most expenditure for the USA charity.

An 86.6% of total revenue of $53,561,580 constituted of donated food while a 95.8% of total expenditure of $53,224,896 made up of program services. It followed by the next highest portion of 10.4% out of total income received $53,561,580 was for community contributions compared to the 2.6% spent on fundraising.

A 1.6% of charity’s money spent on management and general while the rests of income derived from; program revenue of 2.2%, other income of 0.4%, same proportion for investment income and government grants of 0.2%.

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flaws:
Don't need to list categories like:

(donated, community contributions, program revenue, investment income, government grants and other incomes)

(program services, fundraising and, management and general).

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and overall, the revenue is over expenditure.

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