The Table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The table shows that how different modes of travelling have changed in England from the year 1985 to 2000.
Firstly, there is a significant increase in the average distances traveled by walking, using bicycles, and buses. In another words, English people have not tendency more to walk, ride bikes or even use local bus like the 1985.
By contrast, people tend to drive their cars, use taxies and travel long distance destinations by buses or trains on year 2000. Moreover, through this period of time, other modes of travelling become more popular and the table shows a growth of 135 unites. As a consequence, total number of modes of travelling is also increased from 1985 to 2000.
As a conclusion, it seems that walking and riding bicycles are not more popular than before. Furthermore, public transportation vessels like buses, and train and private ones like cars are becoming more and more conventional devices of travelling.
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there is a significant increase in the average distances traveled by walking, using bicycles, and buses.
there is a significant decrease in the average distances traveled by walking, using bicycles, and buses.
In another words, English people have not tendency more to walk, ride bikes or even use local bus like the 1985.
In other words, English people have no tendency to walk, ride bikes or even use local bus like that in 1985.
As a consequence, total number of modes of travelling is also increased from 1985 to 2000.
As a consequence, the total number of modes of travelling is also increased from 1985 to 2000.
are becoming more and more conventional devices of travelling.
are becoming more and more conventional as the devices of travelling.
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