The table below shows the consumer durables (telephone, refrigerator, etc.) owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983.
The table provides the information of consumer durables which was illustrated as percentage of household within 1972 and 1983 in Britain.
First glance at the percentages as portrayed, the television disbursement gained the highest rate overall for 98%, followed by the fridge, which was increase steadily until 94% in 1983. The lowest expenditure spend on dishwasher with 5, raised slightly from 3 and 4 in current years.
Comparing with 1972 and 1983, all products escalated gradually, however the vacuum cleaner spending no longer interested after 1982. Several products started to exist in British consumerism in recent years, for instances dishwasher in 1978 and video product in 1983, which became the lower rate household expenses amongst all.
To sum up, with taking all evidence into account, the changes of percentage in the electrical product in Britain define the people living standards, which means the usage of technological devices became popular per each year, commonly.
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Sentence: The lowest expenditure spend on dishwasher with 5, raised slightly from 3 and 4 in current years.
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Sentence: The table provides the information of consumer durables which was illustrated as percentage of household within 1972 and 1983 in Britain.
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