The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by local authorities in Someland in 1980, 1990 and 2000.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Given is the three pie charts illustrating how the yearly government’s spending in Someland changed after 2 decades from 1980.
Overall, the first impression from the charts is that expenditure on education, including outlay on higher education and K-12 education, was the major spending of this local authorities over the period in question.
Looking at the detail, Someland’s government spent a plenty of money on higher education, its data fluctuated around 35% and 45%, while that on K-12 education witnessed a steady fall from a quarter to under one fifth (18%).
The remaining spendin...
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