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The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart illustrates the unemployment rates among women in the countries, which make up the United Kingdom, both in 2013 and 2014.
In 2013, the smallest rate of unemployed in 2013 was only Wales, with the rates of 5.4%. Within that year, 5.6% of women in Northern Ireland were unemployed. Both countries had experienced of slight decrease of unemployment rates in 2014. In Northern Ireland, the percentage had reached to 4.6, which had dropped of 1% within a year. In addition, the percentage of unemployment rates fell by 0.6% in 2014 in Wales.
England had the greatest rate of unemployed women in 2013, of 6.8%. However, this figure decreased by 0.3% in 2014. Lastly, Scotland was the only country, which showed of increasing trend in unemployment women rates. In 2013, the 6.1% of women was out of work. This increased to 6.7% in 2014, making it the country with the highest women’s unemployment rates of four countries.
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flaws:
No. of Words: 158 200
No. of Different Words: 79 100
More comparisons wanted. for example, among three countries who decrease, Northern Ireland experienced the biggest decrease which is 1%; while Wales less for 0.4% and England for 0.3%
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 10
No. of Words: 158 200
No. of Characters: 738 1000
No. of Different Words: 79 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.545 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.671 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.68 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 44 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 36 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 25 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 18 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.364 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.184 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.273 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.425 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.556 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.055 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4